Some Songs
by muags
you just stepped
on
the distortion pedal
of an
emotional kaleidoscope memory
I had not yet let go of
This song
reminds me of the end
of fall
when wearing a sweater
just isn’t enough
leaves scuffle
over the path in the park
as we walk
arm in arm
back to the car
Oh, I love the beginning of this- what an abstract image. I love it!
Love the images in this poem n the v true representation of modern relationship.
This is really good!
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this is bestttt
Nifty poem! I like your structure and short lines.
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short but this little bit tells a sweet story, the ending is quite charming.
The middle verse…beautiful.
Ya, the kaleidoscope memory is such a fitting metaphor
Love this!